Do you Dragon Ball can work as a Highschool story?

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I've done several topics on this before but I never truly felt satisfied with them. Anyways, how would feel about a highschool story but with a Dragon Ball twist? Perhaps it could be a character-driven romantic comedy (basically combining Toriyama's weakness with one of his strengths) revolving around the rivalry of two schools that specialize in martial arts.

Personally, I think it should based on the 2nd generation cast because they have the most potential for an unique story and they weren't formally educated let alone put in such a setting so it'd be interesting to see.

I'll start...

Schools

Ryu-Ken Highschool

The 'good' school of our heroes.

Daimao Highschool

The 'corrupt' school of the antagonists.

Main Characters

Son Goku
Age: 15
Origin: China (born); Japan (Tohoku region)
Height: 170 cm
Weight: 62 kg
Signature Technique(s): Kamehameha, Ryu-Ken

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The main protagonist and star pupil of the Ryu-Ken Martial Arts team. He's cool-headed, pure of heart, and wants nothing more in life than a good fight which gives him the ideal training ethic but his grades are barely up to standard, which conflicts with his martial arts participation, as he doesn't really study his lessons.

He is also very naive and socially awkward which can rub others the wrong way but his laid-back nature makes him well-liked by virtually everyone he meets.

Vegeta
Age: 19
Origin: Japan
Height: 158 cm
Weight: 56 kg
Signature Technique(s): Galick Gun, Dirty Fireworks

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The star pupil of the Daimao Martial Arts team and main rival of Son Goku. He's arrogant, ill-tempered, calculating, and looks down on Goku (who was disowned by their Saiyan clan) for being born a weakling. He is widely feared across both schools due to his reputation is a violent delinquent and just like Goku, he struggles academically but more because of his indifference to school in general.

Despite his reputation, he doesn't really start fights unless he's being bothered in someway.

Piccolo
Age: 2
Origin: Unknown
Height: 206 cm
Weight: 95 kg
Signature Technique(s): Bakurikimaha, Makankosappo, Makūhōidan, Gekiretsu Kōdan

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Son Goku's secondary rival who was sent to the Ryu-Ken Highschool to kill him which he doesn't carry out because he would rather defeat him fairly in combat. He is very booksmart but also introvert and stoic which alienates the other students. He occasionally aids the Ryu-Ken Martial Arts team when they are in trouble.

Although he never expresses it, he has aligned himself as one of the heroes.

Kuririn
Age: 16
Origin: China
Height: 148 cm
Weight: 45 kg
Signature Technique(s): Kamehameha, Kakusandan, Kienzan

Information

Son Goku's best friend and a member of the Ryu-Ken Martial Arts team. He's very down-to-earth and is much more socially aware than Goku but his low self-esteem often prevents him from seeing his true potential.

Although not the strongest, he can be quite crafty which makes him a valuable asset both academically and in sports.

Bloomers
Age: 18
Origin: America
Height: 164 cm
Weight: 49 kg
Signature Technique(s): N/A
Measurements: 85(D)/58/84

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The longest friend of Son Goku and heiress of the Capsule Corporation. She is an American exchange student who is attending the Ryu-Ken Highschool to expand the Capsule Corp. brand and support Goku in his endeavors. She is initially in a relationship with Yamucha but still has eyes for Vegeta.

Although not a fighter, she aids the team with her intelligence. While vain and can be condescending to those lower in the social ranking (which include Oolong, Yajirobe, and sometimes Kuririn), she is ready to help those in need either it be Goku with his studies or Chi-Chi being more feminine.

Chi-Chi
Age: 15
Origin: Japan (Tohoku region)
Height: 160 cm
Weight: 50 kg
Signature Technique(s): Red Blazing Aura
Measurements: 84(D)/57/83

Information

The new girl of Son Goku's social group and his main love interest. Generally sweet and innocent, her emotions are quick to change at any given moment. She is also very tomboyish as she attended the Ryu-Ken Highschool partly out of her own interest but she does try to be more "lady-like". She quickly develops feelings for Goku which starts off as a one-sided crush but their relationship deepens over time.

Being the daughter of the legendary Gyumao, she is very strong in her own rights even exceeding her father and she joins the Ryu-Ken Martial Arts team to carry his name but paint it in a more positive way.

Yamucha
Age: 18
Origin: Japan
Height: 178 cm
Weight: 71 kg
Signature Technique(s): Kamehameha, Roga Fufu-Ken

Information

Bloomers' on-and-off boyfriend and a member of the Ryu-Ken Martial Arts team. Yamucha, for the lack of better words, is a punk who acts tough but is really a nice guy. Although he considers himself a rival to Vegeta, he is easily bested in every encounter. He is also noted for his shyness around females in general much to the annoyance of Bloomers.

He is usually seen with his flying cat Puar who aids him both academically and in sports. Together they can come up with really great strategies.

Tenshinhan
Age: 18
Origin: China
Height: 183 cm
Weight: 74 kg
Signature Technique(s): Dodompa, Shiyōken, Shishin no Ken, Kikōhō

Information

One of Son Goku's various rivals from the Daimao Martial Arts team who was leading down a dark path but is shown the errors of his ways through opposing the rival school. Despite technically being a villain, he is a very proud martial artist who shows disdain for any dishonorable tactics.

His most distinguished characteristic is his third eye that allows to see everything.


There's more character concepts I have coming soon...
 

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Just put some sex in. No need to turn it into the disgusting hentai style (unnaturally large boobs
and loads of cum splattered everywhere), but don't get on the readers' nerves with the ecchi
''will they, won't they'' bs either.
 
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