A short story about...

[ahill]

Spoiler

So... what did you guys think about it?

 

[Warmmedown]

Is that all of it? Is it part of a collection of stories? First I expected some MRA bullshit, then I expected it to be a slice of life drama, but it turned into comedy/horror. Pretty good. Can't say it was a waste of time reading it, like 75% of the shit on here.

 

[SSJ2]

Is that all of it? Is it part of a collection of stories? First I expected some MRA bullshit, then I expected it to be a slice of life drama, but it turned into comedy/horror. Pretty good. Can't say it was a waste of time reading it, like 75% of the shit on here.

Why do you even frequent the site if you think it's so terrible?

 

[Captain Cadaver]

Could've been decent had it been revealed on the page after her skinny revelation that it was an anorexia induced hallucination. The dumb edge on the last page, whilst making it memorable, overall makes the work critically worthless.

 

[Let's Go Fearless!]

That's what Yoshi's cousin said to him when he ask her out.

 

[ahill]

Is that all of it? Is it part of a collection of stories? First I expected some MRA bullshit, then I expected it to be a slice of life drama, but it turned into comedy/horror. Pretty good. Can't say it was a waste of time reading it, like 75% of the shit on here.

Yeah, it's just an one chapter story lol.