Captain Cadaver said:
He's also terrible at writing a gripping or original story.
I'm going to rant m'kay.
When I first started reading Clay More I was initially interested, sure the characters looked like abominations from the seven gates of hell, but it was sort of unique and during then Clare was actually kind of a badass, then the author proceeded to fuck it all up by making the Awakened Yoma, and fuck my life did they just completely make the regular Yoma meaningless, heck the Awakened Yoma where fucking everywhere as well, shit it was practically worthless being an awakened Yoma.
There was also a Yoma that nearly raped Clare, but I just don't see it ever being interested in doing so, I really think that was just shoved in to make the story more edgy.
Eventually the characters jump in power become fucking ridiculous, Clare went from being capable of being overwhelmed by a group of Yoma to being capable of taking on Awakened Yoma in about a week. Then he started throwing so many Characters against the wall, that I just lost interest in them, except ironically the Awakened Yoma who actually had designs that stand out.
And lets focus on the Awakened Yoma, seriously some of these guys had more personality then the entirety of the Claymores themselves who just got boring, and the sub plots oh my god the sub plots, he crammed so many sub plots into it that eventually I didn't even know what the fuck I was reading anymore.
Even Clare after-while just lose all of her personality and became a boring, overpowered character. All of these combined made me stop caring about the story anymore.
