What do you guys think of my rewrite of the Champa arc?

[Boo Brand Milk]

Instead of it lasting 7 episodes, it lasts like seven minutes. Vegeta and Goku see how lame the saga is unfolding and say "this sucks." The plot gets interrupted twice where Goku and Vegeta are inexplicably at home without their parents watching 80s to early 90s music videos and laughing at them. After they get all the super Dragon balls, because principal Champa is too stressed out to deal with it, both of them try to use the Dragon balls to wish to "score." After nothing happens Vegeta asks Goku, "Did we just score?" Goku replies "yeah! Cool!" Before laughing. Suddenly both of them are back in their house making fun of an early 90s pop music video where Vegeta says "come to Vegeta..." and after Goku says a stupid comment Vegeta yanks him and slaps him silly.

The second half of the episode revolves around their crappy job at Burger World.

What do you guys think of my rewrite of the Champa arc?

 

[Pocket-God]

Love it, 10/10 would watch.

 

[Let's Go Fearless!]

"But but what was Vegeta's SSjin multiplier at that time?"

 

[Papasmurf]

Doesn't have enough

 

[Void]

Plot twist: Champa roofies the two Saiyans.

 

[Boo Brand Milk]

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[Pyro]

Put this on FF.net and watch the fangirls roll in.