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Funny enough, I actually imagine myself as Giorno. I'm very perceptive of gang mentalities, and I favor honor over codes.

They're honestly sound, but I still think that you should have the characters connect to each other more, like maybe you should make more incarnations of them for each Jojo Part.

Polpo was actually cool at first. Then he turned out to be a hypocritical douchebag.

I recommend you avoid using the Daiz numbers for the Saiyan Saga. They're inaccurate even compared to the Daiz numbers for the Freeza Saga. Also, you put in the wrong number for Chi Chi.

This, to be honest. And it was even backed up by his fight with Kizaru on Sabaody.

The Anime adds more character to the characters. I prefer the Anime version of this scene.

His ki technique against Kami was still really cool.

He's actually stronger than any real life human to have ever lived in the Golden Age alone.

And Nappa, actually. Even if Vegeta was disappointed in Nappa, you would think he would at least give him a more graceful death.

I remember you saying on Skype that I should add all of these extra details for the fanfiction like backgrounds and even classes for the characters, like Jheese, Butta, and Reacoom being mercenaries and Zarbon and Dodoria being nobles, etc, and I just got lost and confused.

Snakes eat toads, and toads eat slugs. LOL.

I can never imagine Freeza becoming good in Canon. Ew.

Off topic, but I have SSJG2 at a x2 boost. People tend to give Grade 2 a small boost in general. I used to have Initial Semi Perfect Cell equal to SSJ Vegeta, but in order to make the implications work, you have to improvise. Going by Trunks' reaction to Vegeta going Grade 2 already, I have Semi...

Since Victorious is off the radar (he was the head honcho), I think that Dagon, Goku9001, etc, are definitely recruitable now. Would you be interested in inviting those guys here to post as regulars?

Part 3 = Part 4 >>> Part 5 > Part 2 >> Part 1

When the power went out, the voice call ended as well. Besides, if I did use my laptop, the details wouldn't have been saved because the Internet would go offline if I posted the chapter.

I was satisfied the first story arc was even concluded, to be honest. But there are some details at the beginning of the chapter that were left out because the power went out while we were in the same voice call writing it the first time, so admittedly I could have enjoyed it better. Yes...

Toriko was very good at foreshadowing as well. It was almost as good as One Piece in storytelling during Part I. It's too bad it flopped so hard during Part II.

You gaslighted me into doing it.