Youngjijii's AF continues!

[Scott]

Gokek and Fajita's new transformations don't look too bad. They look a little too similar to base, though. The hair colors make them look like they're only in the process of transforming, rather than making them look like they've actually transformed. The jagged eyebrows are kinda tacky, but I like them.

All in all, though, they're really not much different from DBS's recolors lol. Some weirdos would argue that SSG, SSB, UI, UE, etc would look better if they looked like this.

Anyway, I'm not sure what the new transformations are supposed to be. SS6? But why does Gohandjob lose his eyebrows in his transformation when Gokek and Fajita don't?

From what I could understand of the Portuguese translation, Gokek and Fajita's forms are called "Definitive Super Saiyan" or some shit. But it's really unnecessary to come up with a brand new transformation for them here. They should just be SS6 like Jobhan, and Jobhan's transformation should have looked like theirs (or better yet, not give Jobhan any new transformation at all); the SS3-type Neanderthal look is stupid, anyway.

Youngjijii really just throws random shit at the wall without caring about cohesion lol this is trash. No worse than DBS, though.

 

[Scott]

I would FUCK THE SHIT out of her and BUST A FAT NUT in her ALIEN PUSSY

 

[Scott]

@Papasmurf this your fav fanmanga isn't it?

 

[Scott]

Couldn't they have made him orange instead? Red just looks like Super Saiyan God lol.

 

[Warmmedown]

How's this compared to Multiverse?

 

[Warmmedown]

How's Multiverse compared to Super's stories with multiple universes?

 

[Scott]

How's this compared to Multiverse?

They're both shit lol. I'd rather not try to decide which one smells the least bad.

For the record, I stopped reading Multiverse last November, not long after the tournament ended. I last remember Vegeeta stumbling upon the corpses of [redacted]. Dunno what sort of stupid shit with XXI or whoever is going on in the comic now.

How's Multiverse compared to Super's stories with multiple universes?

Both shit.

 

[Warmmedown]

You have more patience than me, to read stories you find to be bad.
Or do you find it easier to read something that's bad than something that's just uninteresting but not bad in any obvious way? Since there's something there to criticise or get annoyed by, which engages your mind?

 

[Scott]

Something can be entertaining even if it's shit.

I'm partly reading Young Jijii's AF so I can fap to his female Saiyan OC

 

[Yoshi]

I remember when everyone on Neoseeker in the late 2000s used to shit on AF.

 

[Scott]

 

[Scott]

The Gogeeta fight here was pretty badass. Read it a bit over a month ago. Young Jijii is a shitty writer, but he knows how to deliver on the fight scenes. And what more do you really need to do? It's just a fan-manga, anyway. Obviously those sell more when there's a lot of fighting.

Padding his fan-manga out with Toriyama-esque gags wouldn't be an improvement. Just get to the fighting people wanna see. The issue with his fan-manga is just that his plots suck shit. I mean, goddamn. Like, there were three new Saiyans in this arc. The girl is just hentai fan-service, the main antagonist is just Broly meets Coldsteel the Hedgehog, and the big guy was just wasted. His bitch ass immediately got killed after one fight. Literally all he did was job to the main antagonist.

And right before he dies, it turns out, "he wasn't such a bad guy after all". You feel nothing because he just did fuck-all before getting killed. Should've spent more time fleshing out his personality; we didn't need that stupid Gokuu vs. Gohan sparring match. After Vegeeta "killed but not really" the main antagonist, we should've had Gokuu fight the big guy. They could've shown how their personalities were similar; they both genuinely like fighting and aren't interested in killing people. But no, we get that stupid Gokuu vs. Gohan sparring match because Young Jijii felt like ripping off the latest DBS chapter.

Fucking shit writer. Funny to think he'll never be hired by Shuiesha because he's a hentai artist lol. I need to stop reading garbage.