DBZ Super Rewrite

[Six Trails]

Another minor edit, I would change the name of the red form to "Saiyan God" and blue form to "Super Saiyan God" instead of the names we have now.

 

[kriss-]

As long as Goku is top dog -as is intended, you could make Gohan have a fairly good battle with Beerus I supposed. But it would need to be stated that Beerus supressed his power after fighting Goku to give Gohan a chance.

 

[Zoom]

Vegeta turning SSJ3 would be fine, but this "rage boost" is nonsense.

Agreed, Vegeta rage boost is stupid. That's a Gohan only Trait imo.

Why does Gohan have the exclusive rights to rage? I know Vegeta and the rest never got one, but under the right circumstances, there's always a first time.

I understand if Vegeta's rage boost came out of nowhere, but would it be so bad if Super explained the boost which ties together with his righteous heart (ThePrinceOfSaiyans theory).

 

[FutureProtagonist]

Sure it does. Vegeta was still evil, that's the only way Babadi could control him. So it's illogical for him to unlock it.

I don't agree. If the potential is there, any potential unlock method should work, even if the only way for Vegeta to unlock it naturally is if he becomes pure.

Him just getting SSJ3 is far more appropriate.

 

[kriss-]

Nah, if you follow the 'pure heart' theory it's impossible due to Vegeta not having a pure heart. It has nothing to do with potential.

 

[Dragon15]

Beerus should fight a raged ssj3 vegeta and say something like " you are weaker than the fusion and Gohan, but your fighting skills are much better"

I don't hate RF, freezer 4th form should be the one beating Gohan and Gotenks but not from much since in trained to be stronger than buu and only his golden form should allow him to have a godly power. And goku and vegeta's power should not be far above Gohan in normal form ( like in the movie a little above 4th form F) and become godly only in blue ssj form.

 

[Yoshi]

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Why, Southern Gothic?

 

[Southern Gothic]

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Why, Southern Gothic?

Eraser Gun.

 

[kriss-]

As long as Goku is strongest, everything else is fine.

 

[Pyro]

As long as Goku is strongest, everything else is fine.

That has no relevancy for a rewrite. It's like telling someone how to write their own fanfic, which this pretty much is.

 

[FutureProtagonist]

As long as Goku is strongest, everything else is fine.

"everything else is fine", huh? You have no interest in anything beyond "Goku is strongest".

I guess that's the extent of why you defend Super so vigorously, isn't it? That and it has Goku being able to destroy the universe.

True, I suppose that is the extent of what you need to tell a good story. As long as my favorite character is can blow up the most things in this series, and more than the character that I don't like, it's the best.

I guess you kind of embody everything that's wrong with the DBZ fanbase. Too many people have this ridiculous emotional investment in battle powers/feats that that's all they want out of the series anymore; anything related to story telling, character development and actual excitement, adventure, tension, stakes, emotional investment, etc. doesn't matter as long as Goku can travel a trillion billion gajillion times faster than light and Gohan is 1/100000000000000000th of his power. That's the stuff that really matters...

Krillin

 

[kriss-]

Incorrect. It would be better if they actually put some effort into Dragonball Super -at least up until this point. They are clearly half assing it. Nothing looks promising until the Tournament begins.

I actually hate Super and haven't been watching it. It's horrible. Although Chapter 5 has given me some new hope.